Our own mixed nursery rhyme.

Walt: Use interesting language in our writing.

In our Literacy class we had to select two well known Nursery Rhyme put them together and make up a story. We also had to use these 5 words in our writing: Coincidence, observed, blurted, discreetly and ponder. My story is about Humpty Dumpty and Jack n Jill hope you enjoy reading.

Humpty Dumpty was so ill, so Jack and Jill went up the hill, to grab the awesome doctor named Phil. But jack fell down and broke his crown, and Jill came tumbling after. Up got Jack and said to Jill wasn't it a Coincidence that we both fell down the hill.

Humpty Dumpty sat on the wall but Jack n Jill pushed him off and Humpty Dumpty had a great fall. Discreetly Jack and Jill had put Humpty's parts in the rubbish bin so they don't get caught. But accidentally Jill blurted out ”I can't believe we killed Humpty ”.

All the king's horses and all the king’s men had just observed what Jill had said, they saw Humpty lying there dead. They pondered about what Jill had done well jack spun back to the dump and gathered Humpty’s pieces near a farm.

Jack had put Humpty back together again and took him to the King’s men, they gave back Jill and paid their bill and went on back to do their drill.

AIM FOR SUCCESS!

Today we had a important visitor, he is a motivator talker and his name is Mr Andrew Patterson. The first thing he spoke to us was about our future, If we had any idea of what we want to become in the future? Some of us already had our minds made up but most of us didn't so we had to figure out what

A + I =M  meant.  A is for Aspiration, I is for Inspiration equals Motivation. '' If you

do what you love, you'll never work a day in your life'' by Mark Anthony. Andrew said that we should all be givers not takers, what goes around comes around, if you give you will receive more. There's other emotional, motivating things that Andrew also talked to us about, and I am actually happy that he told us all those things so we all know what's things are like. Big Massive Thanks to Andrew Patterson for coming over to our school and giving us a Fun, Motivating speech session it was wonderful having you here I hope you keep doing what your doing and keep spreading the message all over the world.